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Your World In Your Eyes

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ethome
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Your World In Your Eyes

Girl it's six in the morning, daybreak dawning
and deep down but not destroyed
I'm a shadow of a love you knew
inside a ring of fire and youth
on a river of dreams passin through.

Goodnight Mr. Moon
Somewhere I used to be
I see you smilin at me.
Good morning Mr. day
I know it's time again
To be on my way.
With your world in your eyes
I just can't stay.

Girl it's about where we've been, talkin chin to chin
and all the things that matter
are in the love and truth we knew
inside a ring of fire and youth
on a river of dreams passin through.

Goodnight Mr. Love
Somewhere I used to be
Keeps you inside of me.
Good morning Mr. Day
I know it's time again
To be on my way
With your world in your eyes  
I just can't stay.

With your world in your eyes
You know I can't stay!


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 03-20-2010 07:12 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo Eric,

This works very nice.  It's good to see your poems again.

Bobby
Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 03-21-2010 04:06 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Dear Eric, it's so nice to see you  back on Pip and with such a captivating love song. Beautiful poetic expressions, with a melancholic hue.

Love,
Margherita
jwesley
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3 posted 03-21-2010 09:24 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

enjoyed this my friend, especially the first stanza...

j.
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 03-22-2010 05:55 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Bittersweet and beautiful!!!
faithmairee
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5 posted 01-05-2011 10:29 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

very profound and beautifully written...great work!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
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6 posted 01-10-2011 06:37 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thanks all for the kind comments.

Eric

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