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Open Poetry #46

The Pied Piper

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-03-19 09:35 PM

True to myself
True to myself

Shoot me in the head
if go back to the life
I led

I came I came

gone gone
stay gone

move on

the shark dies
when he stops the swim

keep on keep on

doors will open
doors will come

need nothing but to step through
step through

all for a pence
all for the pound

they get what comes to them
when the piper comes around

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2010-03-19 09:39 PM

Poignant poem...I really loved this~

I especially loved the lines:
"the shark dies
when he stops the swim"

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2010-03-21 04:19 AM

I love the rythm of the poem, a fighting rythm, a deep fight, this is vivid and thoughtful...Thanks for the poem.

regards

yann

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