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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2010-03-19 12:53 PM


Of Our Dream

© Copyright 2010 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
gilead
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1 posted 2010-03-19 03:00 PM


Astonishing verse, Bill. Not just the superb craftsmanship, but the enormous power of emotion it conveys in sweet remembrance, and sadness---those binary, twin emotions we so often feel. I congratulate you on this splendid work of poetic art!

Best wishes --

Art

Ariana
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2 posted 2010-03-19 07:40 PM


Bill

I remember that bridge, so I am packed and ready to go.  You name the day!

Ariana

LindsayP
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3 posted 2010-03-19 09:55 PM



Hello Bill, you have written a very heart warming poignant poem here my friend. A

real delight to read, A real romantic setting where love was born.thanks for sharing. Take care my friend.

Lindsay

nourzihane
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4 posted 2010-03-20 05:39 AM


Dear friend ... Bill charles...

May God keep your hands which writes the beauty

thank you
Nourzihane

threadbear
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5 posted 2010-03-20 04:24 PM


a fine salute, Bill,
to better
and mystical times
when love was fresh on vine
and the colors of romance were bold.
Jeff

ethome
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6 posted 2010-03-20 05:04 PM


Ah, Bill, I see you're still writing beautiful verse and making the word pictures come alive in colorful romanticism.

Luv it!!

Eric

Kim
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7 posted 2010-03-20 05:13 PM


Wow. A really moving poem!


Richy
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8 posted 2010-03-20 09:00 PM



What an idylic setting for this romantic dreamscape my friend.

You are the master of romance Bill, I bow to your loving heart!

Beautiful!
Richard

2islander2
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9 posted 2010-03-21 04:07 AM


Thanks Bill for the lovely poem and the enchanting romance, I took a walk in the valley and it was gorgeous...Thanks a lot.

yann

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2010-03-21 06:06 PM


we should all have memories like that~~

beautifully done, Bill

M

Margherita
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11 posted 2010-03-21 06:38 PM


Your memories are idyllic, dear Bill. You both remember and maybe the bridge remembers too and is calling out to you ...

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2010-03-22 01:23 PM


Yo Bill,

Nice work on this poem.  I never got to Glockamora, however, I found Dublin to be a nice enough town.

Bobby

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13 posted 2010-03-22 06:07 PM


How very beautiful! *S* The picture and words make such a lovely whole! *S*
Honeybee
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14 posted 2010-03-22 08:36 PM


My goodness this is fabulous...and a fitting presentation too!
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15 posted 2010-03-29 12:11 PM


Very love, Bill Charles.

A

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