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sing me a song |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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Sing me a Song sing me a song one that’s starts my heart to feeling. not a big production, not a life changer, just a little song with a lot of emotion. I am alone in this world, I only hear my own thoughts all day, every day. Sit on my window ledge little song bird and sing me a song. |
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StarlitMind Junior Member
since 2010-03-17
Posts 12New England |
I really liked the last poem you posted, expiration. This one is good though in a different sense because it captures that same mellow blue mood, and yet still has an uplifting quality to it. I thought both were moving though. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you Star. I guess I have been in that kinda mood lately. Z. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Mixing Bowl Blues Stirring...a little midnight hour turning Deep blue it seems, never the dreams in sunlight to see Stirring... a little momentary burning, a drop of passion to the mood of alone...will exude pheramone...might it be, an intensely pleasing recipe Stirring...as the midnight hour turning might describe in perspective anew, some intense rondezvous The color of moods blend discerning Suddenly in a song, upbeat strings you along...an intentional touch of divine...where the blue and the red stir the wine.  Fun! |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Oh yeah Diamond, (snaping fingers) Ohhhh yeah. Z. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
May you hear that little song ... there is always a tune in the air, I assure you. Finde deine Worte sehr schön, obwohl so melancholisch. Love, Margherita |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I guess everyone wants a lovable little bird to sing to them. No high drama just a tiny tune that brings happiness to all. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Put out some birdseed and you will have a whole flock of birds and you will forget that you are alone. Ida |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Love this! I think everyone wants a melody like this~~ At first I thought this was a poem to a new lover: "sing me a song one that’s starts my heart to feeling. not a big production, not a life changer, just a little song with a lot of emotion." Irregardless I loved the sweet twist at the ending.... |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
This was awesome. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Zeigeist - I'll get out my guitar and sing you a song full of the blues. Listen for it... BC |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
thanks all for your kind replies and words of advice. Most of you hit upon my theme for this write. When things are really hard and your dragging your feet, pulling the same ole weight day after day, sometimes just one kind gesture, or a little toon that lifts your spirits really goes along way to helping you though it. Quite often it is you all here on PiP that are the givers of the toon and kind words and for that I can't thank you all enough. Zeitgeist. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thanks Bill, I am a big blues fan and I play harmonica every day, So bust out that guitar and I will jam along with ya. lol Thanks buddy. Zeitgeist. |
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