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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2010-03-16 03:38 PM





dear mother nature

dear mother nature
some of your land is drowning
where is your sunshine?

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1 posted 2010-03-20 12:02 PM


I hope that Mother Nature hears your questioning plea and responds, Marti.  I like this.

A

2islander2
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by the sea
2 posted 2010-03-21 04:24 AM


may your poem be read a million times , thanks for the superb write.

yann

Sunshine
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3 posted 2010-03-21 05:04 PM


Believe me, poet,
the sun is trying to shine
in more ways than one!

Much needed...with only a few
rainy nights to allow us
our Camelot feel during the days.



Enjoyed!


Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2010-03-21 07:50 PM


Mother Earth is a little bit distracted, rain and sunshine are sent to the wrong places it seems. But then, does this depend only on her? I love your inquiring voice here, dear Marti!

Well done.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2010-03-21 09:18 PM


Two reply's above, my friend, is quite wonderful sunshine...

Enjoyed this...though we have had several days of clear blue sky and sunshine down here...except for yesterday...

j.

Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
6 posted 2010-03-22 10:48 AM


Thank you all for your replies! The sun finally came out and it was 70ยบ in Boston over the weekend. My son's basement is dry thanks to 5 pumps running round the clock for a week. An angel of a plumber fixed their furnace and a great 'Grampa Bobo' fixed their washer and dryer. Everything else ... into the dumpster! What a weekend!!


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