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Open Poetry #46

Will the Sun Rise

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-15 09:35 AM

With the passage of time
Comes the deepening of love
Like the darkening day
In the setting of the sun
Changing shades of colored sky
All fading to blackest night
To hold steady, all feelings the same
Constant, never shared with the light

But she, in my arms remains
As the blissful sleep enfolds me
I trust my soul to her
So in the morning I might see
And behold all that I am
With an opening of her waking eyes
After a night like this I wonder,
Will the sun ever rise?

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

1 posted 2010-03-16 04:32 PM

Eventually the sun will rise! Nice thoughts.

ooxx Marti

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2010-03-16 06:37 PM

I always figure its gonna rise no matter what, so if it doesn't, I'm obviously in a position to not notice anyway.

j.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2010-03-16 08:21 PM

As I watch the sun set from my desk window,
I wonder not that it will rise, but that
it will be warm.

Still a bit chilly in my neck of the world,
but your poem did its best to warm my heart.

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