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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2010-03-13 10:34 AM



Its a well known fact
my minds not intact
and my marbles are rolling away

All logic has gone
my humors all rong
an I have nothing usfull to say

I have scares that show
and my confidence is low
in this my past had a play

My eye sight is shot
I sit in one spot
and do nothing day after day

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Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27
Posts 315

1 posted 2010-03-15 12:11 PM


  Well, I have something to say. Get off your duff and start living. Don't let yourself be among the living dead. No matter how bad off you think you are there is some one out there worce off than you.  

Know that you are loved and Jesus thinks you are Great. Bask in the sun shine. Smell the flowers. Get a dog.

We all care about you.

Billie C.


kudanesh
Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
2 posted 2010-03-15 11:03 AM


thank you for your lifting reply... all tho I do not believe so much in Jesus. but I believe the same as you, in a higher power indeed. I wouldn't say I have a religion in the sense of Christianity Judaism or Muslim but the world is a making of something great and is not to be mist tho certain times hold feelings witch inspire such words.

thank you again. I wish you a very hansom day

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-03-17 08:25 AM


I am not in the habit of telling people how to live their lives.  I`m only here to tell people when they got a good poem to be happy and enjoy it.
kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
4 posted 2010-03-17 06:13 PM


THANK YOU...
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