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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2010-03-13 10:32 AM



From time to time
We'll think of a ryhme
that dosnt quite make sence

Pen starts to shout
then Paper storms out
leaving me sat out on the fence

Pen and I tried
"but without Paper" Pen cried
our insperaton is totaly dead

My minds a siv
will Paper forgive
all the nasty things Pen ever said

A day or two past
Paper returns home at last
and gives Pen a big hug and a kiss

They vowed never again
would Paper argue with Pen
then we danced and came out with this

© Copyright 2010 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2010-03-14 12:19 PM


That was fun to read, dear Andrew. Nicely creative. Pen and paper still maintain their charm despite the computer era!

Love,
Margherita  

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
2 posted 2010-03-14 12:24 PM


thank you glad you liked it..
Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27
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3 posted 2010-03-14 10:00 PM


  I like your sence of humor I wonder why it sounds so famiiar?
  Billie C.

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
4 posted 2010-03-15 11:10 AM


The hole point in this is that when I write it is never straight on to the computer always with pen and paper first never pencil. with pen you can not delete what you have written and so it becomes a noted mistake or a road leading to what the poem could have been. but some times I go to write and nothing comes out but words that do not go together... I call this pen talk . and at some point you run out of paper. I don't see me as writing poems allot of the time but my pen and paper sometimes I don't even know what I am writing till it is done... but sense of humour yes and reality also... thank you for your reply
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