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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
Posts 409


0 posted 2010-03-10 05:48 AM


Surrounded by my past,
I have discovered a lot.
I have discovered at last
The anguish of loss in my chest.
This anguish is all that I've got.

Surrounded by this gloom,
I only want to break through.
I only want thoughts to bloom
Like weeds by a foreigner's tomb.
He fought for the word, proven true.

Surrounded by this mist,
I have apparently drown.
I have apparently missed
The time that still runs through my fists.
My anger could burn it all down...

Welcome to my website:
http://april-abd.bravehost.com/Homepage.htm

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-03-10 07:33 PM


Yo dear April,

This is quite good.  Keep up the good work.

Love Bobby

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
2 posted 2010-03-11 08:42 AM


Cool stuff. I like the rhythm you write with.
Waiting for more.

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