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Paul D. Hennigan
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since 2009-02-03
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0 posted 2010-03-08 03:06 AM



  
God made angels for heaven
He made them for his bidding to do
Special spirits to satisfy all his needs
And then Earth Angel he made you

He took a ball of clay and formed you
From two lives that he had entwined
Loving parents most certainly they were
So I asked God if she could be mine

God said," I put her on earth for a reason"
"And for a season she belongs to you
If you want this season to be eternal
It's not only by words, but deeds you must do"

So with all my mind and soul I hasten to try
Making her mine is the task I will strive
To deserve her love and worthy to be a part
Of Heavens perfect Earth Angel, never to be apart  

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-03-11 07:03 PM


Another very beautiful write, dear Paul! And for a moment I thought you were speaking of our very own "Earth Angel" here on Pip, who represents all the grace and beauty that her name suggests.

Love,
Margherita

Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27
Posts 315

2 posted 2010-03-15 02:37 AM


What a lovely tribute to the love in your life. I hope your  dream comes true. She is a lucky lady.

Billie C.

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-04-13 08:42 PM


The rhyme and meter of this piece are melodious to the the ear.  I hope that others discover the wonder of this poem.
Paul D. Hennigan
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since 2009-02-03
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Texas USA
4 posted 2010-04-20 01:10 AM


You guys are too kind. Thanks!
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