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Open Poetry #46

Cedar

unfinishedlife
Junior Member

since 2010-03-06

Posts 22

0 posted 2010-03-07 01:59 PM

My body: collapse.
Like trees in lightning..
To twist, to warp, to fall
Like rope, like winds, like trees.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-03-07 02:25 PM

Cedars are beautiful. We are vulnerable like trees ... yes.

Succinct, yet the message is conveyed well.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2010-03-07 02:30 PM

I like this.

A

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-03-07 03:09 PM

yes! Nice!

I don't think I've welcomed you

welcome to PIP!

unfinishedlife
Junior Member

since 2010-03-06

Posts 22

4 posted 2010-03-07 03:16 PM

Thank you all

Although, I think this qualifies as what my cousin would refer to as a 'poem fart'

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-03-17 08:31 AM

I like the rhythm in this piece. Nice.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

6 posted 2010-03-17 08:55 AM

This is very good for a 'poem fart'. lol

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