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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2010-03-07 10:24 AM



In the streets of Santiago,
an unreal sight, inhabitants
in pajamas meet young people
who take out discotheques,
all the generations meet in the street
but not for the same reasons.
An earthquake has just occurred…

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-03-07 10:31 AM


Dear Yann, I was just wondering about you ... and here you are.

Your poem is impressive and reflects indeed a time of great confusion, but you have seen deeper than the surface.

Excellent.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2010-03-07 11:50 AM


dear Margherita, thank you so much for your delicious comment, yes in fact the poem is deeper as you underlined it, itn is alson as you guessed about communication between generations...I am glad you commented and enjoyed the poem...

regards

yann

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