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Marchmadness
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0 posted 2010-03-06 06:31 PM


Wait up!
Where is everybody going?
One by one
they're all leaving,
as if the hour grows late
and the party is winding down.
It is.

Tuesday...
we'll all gather
to say farewell
to the one
who has left us
this time.



                   Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (03-06-2010 08:32 PM).]

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latearrival
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1 posted 2010-03-06 07:12 PM


Ida, understanding this.  one by one their time comes and we are left to  memories. latearrival.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2010-03-06 07:34 PM


Ida, I've worn these shoes.

It is.

Indeed.




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3 posted 2010-03-07 12:17 PM


I just want to do what I do to my Mother when she says this .. I just want to hug you.

xoxoxo
Alison

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2010-03-07 01:15 AM


An old friend passed away he other day.   There was a large group of us who hung out together for years, fighting political battles and getting into mischief. Too many have passed away in the last few years. I'm tired of funerals. I'll take that hug, Alison.
                                  Ida

OwlSA
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5 posted 2010-03-07 05:57 AM


Here's another hug from me, Ida.  

Hug
Owl

Margherita
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6 posted 2010-03-07 10:57 AM


Yes, those sad moments of saying good-bye multiply while we move ahead on our own path ... towards Home. It brings me comfort to think that what really occurs is a "transition" and yet the pain resists all phylosophical thoughts.

Love and tender hugs.
Margherita

Richy
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7 posted 2010-03-07 11:40 AM



I'm sorry to hear about this Ida, I'm sure this person loved you and your wonderful spirit.


Heartfelt poem.
Richard

2islander2
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8 posted 2010-03-07 11:57 AM


Hello Ida, this is so sad for your friend and those who love him, the poem is a way to enlighten this transition of life for another world....Thanks for the very emotionnal and thoughtful poem...


yann

gilead
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9 posted 2010-03-07 12:11 PM


"One generation comes, another passes away, but the earth abides, ever." We must endure the sadness of loss, as we look to the bright promise and hope of new birth and renewal.

My heart is with you.

Art

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10 posted 2010-03-07 12:42 PM


oh Ida! The first line caught me off guard

and I fell in fast

well done!

The Lady
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11 posted 2010-03-13 09:56 PM




stark and poignant
caught me offguard too
I'm sorry for your loss

Earl Brinkman
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12 posted 2010-03-14 06:28 AM


The opening stanza captures the reader dragging him into the poem.  Since I am new here I am at a loss for words.  But I would like to tell you that I am sorry for your loss.
Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2010-03-14 01:08 PM


Yo dear Ida,

Life always involves death.  Even for the big trees.

Love Bobby

jwesley
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14 posted 2010-03-14 01:39 PM


...seems to be happening more and more now, friends and family moving on, when for so long it seemed they'd all live forever.

Good write, my friend.

jimmy

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15 posted 2010-03-14 04:41 PM


Know that I feel this one...

*hugs* Ida--I was just telling my husband I am no longer sure which one I was more afraid of--dying, or burying everyone.

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
16 posted 2010-03-14 05:10 PM


Yes, as we get older there's just too much burying going on, Karen.
                                 Ida

Klassy Lassy
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17 posted 2010-03-14 07:30 PM


I'm swallowing hard, and sending a , Ida.

This quote by Richard Bach comes to my thought, whether it be a family member or a friend who has passed:

"Don't be dismayed at good-byes.  A farewell is necessary before you can meet again.

And meeting again, after moments or lifetimes, is certain for those who are friends."


Love is like that....

May your heart be peaceful.  

KL

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