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Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

0 posted 2010-03-04 03:22 AM

White noise
thunders like Niagara,
lipsync-ed promises of April
mouthed beneath a bridal veil
of wind and spume.

Rainbows dance
on the other side of the moon.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2010-03-04 12:11 PM

Short, but very sweet.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-03-04 05:20 PM

I am quite impressed by your choice of words, you created great imagery and sounds, dear Karen.

Love,
Margherita

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

3 posted 2010-03-04 06:52 PM

Stunning.
L,
H

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2010-03-04 09:59 PM

mouthed beneath a bridal veil
of wind and spume.

Magic words my dear Karen, they paint a vivid picture, very well done.

Lindsay

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2010-03-05 10:39 AM

I knew I would not be disappointed! This is - poetry that I love.

A

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2010-03-05 10:41 AM

I appreciate you all sharing your thoughts with me very much. March does come in like a lion, April patient yet, and acquiescent in the wings.

May spring hold sweet surprises for us all!

KL

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

7 posted 2010-03-05 11:02 AM

Alison...

Good morning!

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2010-03-05 12:28 PM

Karen is it?

What a wonderful name for a writer of such words.

I couldn't write small poems if my life depended on it.

Rainbows dancing on the other side of the moon.

Funny,that's where I came from, and where I'll return to, one day soon.

I adored this!

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

9 posted 2010-03-05 02:12 PM

Than perhaps I shall see you there!  Until then I hope you find the peace you seek, for where the heart is, there lies your treasure.

Yes, I'm Karen, sometimes referred to as Lass or Lassy, but I answer to both. I'm pleased to meet you, too.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

10 posted 2010-03-05 04:09 PM

liked very mucho.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2010-03-05 04:42 PM

Love it, KL.
Ida

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

12 posted 2010-03-06 11:09 AM

Paul, I think you will always find your pot 'o gold on this side of the moon and, probably, your p(int)'s & q(quart)'s, too.

Thank you for reading.

Ida, I always love hearing from you. I'm not writing a lot lately, so it's hit and miss...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2010-03-06 03:37 PM

What an image!
Beautiful...sparkling.

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