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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2010-03-01 11:35 PM


Bring me a dream brighter than a star
from sleep's abandoned shores
passionately near, impossibly far
When something courageously new
takes wing, a fearless flight
within the heart ever true
Then it will be possible
to find something unbelievable
yes, even miraculous
Between two

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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1 posted 2010-03-01 11:55 PM


Beautifully captured.

I felt this one.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2010-03-02 12:20 PM


Robert - written with feeling, just beautifully done...

BC

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2010-03-02 10:23 AM


Gorgeous write.
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2010-03-02 10:35 AM


Robert,

it's easy to see that your muse hasn't left
your side.

Well done, Sir.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2010-03-03 01:34 PM


A very lovely little gem, dear Robert.

Love,
Margherita

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