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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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I painted the sky with my fingers and it was flawless, so I named it after you: and called it wonderful. You were strong, and so were your eyes. So strong they made my McDonald's coffee, already weak, taste even more of water and loose dirt. And for that I called you wonderful. I could taste your scent it wetted my tongue like water with twice the electrolytes and three three times the superpowers You made me superhuman, and for that I knew you were wonderful. ______________________________________________ Falling In Love Alone. (Formerly "Leaf, Overturned.") Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paul - excellent write, with feelings in your words... BC |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you so much, Monsieur Bill. It is always a pleasure to know that a poet such as yourself has read something I've written. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love IS the superpower! And your words do it justice! ... and for that I call you wonderful!   Love, Margopargo |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
aw. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You ignite my senses with poetry and for that I call you wonderful. - Alison |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You're the sweetest, Aliboo. You keep me going. Thank you. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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