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Dadygoose
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0 posted 2010-03-01 07:09 PM


The Playpen of Night


Naked, you and I, as when new Life was created;
Having unapologetic fun,
tumbling, laughing in each other’s arms;
frolicking together in the playpen of Night.
:-------)

Hey, nobody's human!

© Copyright 2010 Jaime Fradera - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2010-03-01 11:05 PM


Dadygoose - the more I read this the more I liked it. Great write...

BC

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2 posted 2010-03-06 01:42 AM


Jaime,

I like this too.  It's a part of you that you don't show us much.

Ali

Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-03-06 07:19 AM


As your poem shows there is no better way to celebrate together!
Dadygoose
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4 posted 2010-03-07 02:14 AM


Well Ali, I guess now the secret is out and now everybody nose? (a)
J

Hey, nobody's human!

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5 posted 2010-03-07 02:40 AM


shhhhhh, Jaime

I don't want to sully your reputation - and people will talk!



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