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bending orchids into love letters

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Lamar Cole
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25 posted 07-09-2010 12:33 PM       View Profile for Lamar Cole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lamar Cole

Very nice and thought provoking.
jwesley
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26 posted 07-09-2010 08:39 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

personally I think the "spacing" puts heart and soul into the piece . . . much, much better than dots (. . . ) or dashes (---) as pauses.  The spaces put the linger into the pause that visible marks cannot.

Just never thought to do it that way, myself.
You may have opened a worm hole here . . .

Loved it (again)

j.
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27 posted 09-14-2010 11:31 AM       View Profile for rosepetals36   Email rosepetals36   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals36

I SOOOOO love your writing I hope you write something soon!

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

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28 posted 05-20-2012 07:59 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

the last dance will be
gods love and peace
we shall shake all evil
off this planet for eternity

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

 
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