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dazzlingprecious
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since 2010-02-10
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0 posted 2010-02-25 12:04 PM



Bring me some colours.
If I wil run far, far he still folows.

Is the world full of grey ?
Iam falling down, but you want me to stay.

deeply, deeply in my fears.
I can feel the purple, throught my tears.

I know, purple is not the brightest colour in my life.
But others are hiding inside, scared from all of my strife.

I want to dance with red flower.
Steal the red, and captured in a tower.

This Tower would be full of yellow, green and blue.
Maby the I would find my clue.

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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
1 posted 2010-02-25 12:09 PM


This is cool.
gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
2 posted 2010-02-25 05:44 PM


Color is a gift to the soul; may yours be ever bright. I love how the poem enfolds color and desire.

Regards ---Art

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