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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-02-25 02:27 AM




Whispering the world's secrets
through the lips of your eyelids
every time they opened.
I caught them in my hands rough and cracked
from holding onto heavy things
like the past, and high expectations.

You were holding my entire world
like liquid hope in your hands.
And I cheered like a child for you
because I knew it would lather well,
and wash your sadness away.


________________________
Leaf, Overturned. (surgery miniseries.)
Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-02-25 05:18 PM


Powerful poetic expressions, dear Paul.

When past and expectations are discarded, happiness filters through beautifully.

Love,
Margopargo

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2010-02-25 05:25 PM


Letting go of the past and expectations is like taking a shotgun to a coffee filter,


happiness just plain pours through, unfiltered.
<3

Thank you, my dearest margopargo.


Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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