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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2010-02-24 10:16 PM


My Attending Angel

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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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1 posted 2010-02-25 02:30 AM


Dope.


Especially the eternity's bed bit... clever.


Really excellent poem here, very kind.


Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2010-02-25 07:26 AM


Dear Bill, this is very poignant!

The soul is always ready, it's the heart who loves that pleads for a special agreement . Your feelings are beautifully rendered.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2010-02-25 01:43 PM


Bill this is wonderful.the picture is quite upsetting.

regards

yann

gilead
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4 posted 2010-02-25 03:15 PM


This is a splendid poem; it tugs at the tenderest strings of the heart. It brings to mind one of my favorite Psalms---

For he shall give his angels charge
over thee, to keep thee in all thy ways.

They shall bear thee up in their hands,
lest thou dash thy foot against a stone.
---Psalm 91:10-11.

This moves me deeply; you have crafted an important, enduring work of poetic art.

My Regards ---Art


Ariana
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5 posted 2010-02-28 09:33 PM


Bill

This is beautifully done.  We all have guardian angels.  I am glad to see that you believe in your beautifull angel.  

Ariana

Richy
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Posts 3050

6 posted 2010-02-28 10:19 PM



Very, very cool Bill.

The picture, the poem, the poet.
It was a perfect fit.

I guess you could say,
a match made in heaven!

Rich

passing shadows
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7 posted 2010-03-01 10:06 AM


HOLY MOSES!
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2010-03-01 01:06 PM


Paul - appreciate your comments on this writing. Much thought went into this one...

Margherita - Yes, the soul is always ready, and also the heart for a special agreement...

yann - the picture I found also was somewhat upsetting, but..

gilead - your comments are most kind, and the Psalm is to remember. Thank you so much for these words...

Ariana - oh yes, I do believe in my guardian angel, whom I also believe will appear to me one day...

Richy - you're most kind with your comments to my writings, and I do appreciate your words...

passing shadows - you've said it all with your great comment...

BC

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