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Sunshine
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0 posted 2010-02-23 08:18 PM



This Day

Today I will take one word
And thus make it sing;

Today I will free one bird
And help give it wing;

Today I will smile at you
And allow you to be;

Today I will laugh with you
And pray you laugh with me.

Today I will cherish all things
Just because they are here;

Today I will give of myself,
Because I hold me dear;

Today I will face my fear
And fly straight in its face;

Today I will hold you close
And be nourished from your embrace.

Today I will do, and be, my best
And know if I fail, I tried, the test.

And tomorrow, I will begin again.

18 November, 1999
©KRJ


This, as a prayer for not only you, but for me, tomorrow, on yet another sojourn into the unknown. Say a little prayer, if you're willing, around 1:00 CDT. Bless you!


© Copyright 2010 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
gilead
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1 posted 2010-02-23 09:13 PM


Magnificent verse, bold and courageous, yet tender, and filled with hope---a poem of quiet eloquence, well wrought. I am moved.

Art

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2 posted 2010-02-23 09:22 PM


Art, thank you. Say a little prayer, if you are so moved to do so....

and thank you, my gentle friend.


gilead
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3 posted 2010-02-23 09:30 PM


Sunshine, there's an old gospel song I used to sing as a boy---"Prayer Changes Things." I will say a prayer.

Art

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2010-02-23 10:20 PM


Yo dear Sunshine,

I liked the thought behind this poem.  It's a smooth running poem that works  for me.

Bobby

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5 posted 2010-02-23 10:40 PM


Art, you've always been God-sent...thank you...

and Bobby? Bless you, and thanks.


threadbear
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6 posted 2010-02-23 10:57 PM


very very moving, Sunshine.  For those quiet private times with G*d.  
This would work nicely for those times and for rejuvination.  
Jeff

Tim
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7 posted 2010-02-23 11:13 PM


From the legal profession to higher education?
Our loss, their gain.
Good luck tomorrow.

The Lady
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8 posted 2010-02-24 01:07 AM




a feel of Emily Dickinson, Karilea
I hold you dear too my friend
I will say a prayer.

Margherita
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9 posted 2010-02-25 05:59 PM


Love the awareness that emanates from this intense and beautiful write.

Didn't see this in time, but I will still say a little prayer of gratitude for the outcome will be the best for you ... anyway.

"Thank you Universe for guiding Karilea in this very particular moment"!

Love,
Margherita

LngJhnAg
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10 posted 2010-02-26 11:24 PM


A sweet poem, Karilea.  Has it really been that long ago?
passing shadows
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11 posted 2010-02-27 12:59 PM


well I missed the 24th but I made up for it today

and yesterday

prayer is a good thing
and so is tomorrow


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12 posted 2010-03-03 03:14 PM


Thanks for reading, my friends. The prayer request I made for myself wasn't answered in the way I wanted, but that doesn't mean that what I asked for was meant to be at this time. It just means that there's something else coming my way.

This particular rejection letter mentioned receiving over 150 applications for this one position. I was one of the few who were interviewed. I rank that as better than those who weren't interviewed, right? It also gave me a reason to look in the mirror, take stock, and dress up for the day.

It was a good day then. It's a good day now.






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