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Open Poetry #46

I AM LOST IN YOU

therightside
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 64
USA

0 posted 2010-02-23 03:58 AM

Like the fondness of an old memory
I curl into the comfort you provide
As I press into the length of you
Thoughts released, race through my mind

You’re the temptation of which I resent most
Yet it is you, I am lost in the absence of
Fallen to the persuasion of your incessant pull
My thoughts, exist profound, only in your world

Hope fights for acknowledgment
In the forefront of my conscious mind
To God, I promise gratitude
At the loss of Morning’s burden, you leave behind

I’ve grown to know you so well
In the darkest depths of the night
You know the most coveted of my secrets
My most shallow fears, you’ve heard me cry

Others float peacefully in dreams exempt of time
As you tug at the bit of sanity I have lingering inside
To your hold I fall victim, as it’s ever more tight
Suffocation, inevitably, seems my future demise

The delicate minutes tick ever so slow
As they mockingly dance across the face of time
Insomnia - I am your’s….
…as you are forever mine

[This message has been edited by therightside (02-23-2010 05:46 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-02-23 06:33 AM

a pleasure to see this side of your soul...

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-02-23 08:46 AM

I can relate.

I love how you wrote it as a mystery and then at the end the way you revealed Insomnia. Brilliant.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-02-23 05:21 PM

Nice...James

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