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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2010-02-22 10:16 AM


That is human which strives for lofty heights
That is the day which descends into endless night
Time heals not all of the wounds
For all of the wounds come too soon
We are of a body, whole and entire
We are the dancing flames fueling the fire
Beauty in nature will pass by unrecognized when viewed endlessly
But how much do we mourn if beauty is removed eternally
What if the moon and the stars shine no more?
What if the waves no longer break upon the shore?
Great works, not destruction, ageless remain
For all journeys through different paths, destination the same
Perceptions vary, on polar points of view depend
One’s enemy is yet another’s faithful friend
Outward confidence belies inner hopeless desperation
Change is the one constant in the life equation
The smallest things can somehow shatter
But a hundred years from now and they won’t matter
The best of times offers a tantalizing, never-ending illusion
Yet, like the worst of times, all suffer the same conclusion

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1 posted 2010-02-23 02:41 PM


A very well done factual look at life, and I especially could relate to these lines, among many more.

Time heals not all of the wounds
For all of the wounds come too soon
and
For all journeys through different paths, destination the same

Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2010-02-23 02:42 PM


Thank you Mysteria. Glad you can relate.
I think we all can.

How are the Olympics going for ya'll?

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2010-02-25 07:19 AM


Perceptions vary, on polar points of view depend


You have done a great job here, dear Jerry. Enjoyed reading your philosophical ponderings.

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
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4 posted 2010-02-25 08:49 AM


Thank you M.

Liked that someone else enjoyed my ponderings.

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