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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-02-21 07:29 PM


                 moving on

When night befalls this barren,
   vexing Winter world
which has taken everything,
and the heart is but an empty vessel
brim-full of shadows and starlight,
take comfort in transcendent dreams
of timeless love and Spring's renewal,
ever-rippling on the evening breezeā€¦
for hope and life move on.

              --- b. e. adams (2/21/2010)


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latearrival
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1 posted 2010-02-21 08:37 PM


One thing we can not stop and that is the beginning of a new day. How we chose to see it and move to it's warmth or chill is up to us. Enjoyed your post. latearrival
gilead
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2 posted 2010-02-21 10:17 PM


Sound, and sense, and beauty, enfolded into a magnificent poem!
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2010-02-21 11:40 PM


secondhanddreampoet - yes indeed, life moves on for sure, and no stopping it...

BC

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2010-02-23 01:43 PM


Wise and beautiful, Bruce.
                       Ida

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2010-02-23 05:11 PM


Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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6 posted 2010-02-27 12:11 PM




I always open your work looking for perfection Bruce
and I always find it


passing shadows
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7 posted 2010-02-27 12:53 PM


nothing wrong with moving on, nothing at all

beautiful write

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8 posted 2010-02-28 12:38 PM


Bruce,

I see pictures in your words every time.

Your friend,
Alison

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2010-02-28 09:39 AM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

Time always moves, and life and hope always move with it.

This is a wise poem.

Bobby

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