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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2010-02-21 06:41 PM

See Through My Eyes
What do you see?
In my eyes
Do you see love?
There is always love for you
In my heart
Don't let it go
Out of your heart
Take my heart
Make it happen
This is love we called
This is love we feel
See through my eyes
This is m love for you
I am giving you my love
Tell me what do you see
Through my eyes
My love to you

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2010-02-21 06:51 PM

Well even without my see through glasses I got through a comic book back in the 60's I could still see all the love pouring out of your heart through your eyes dear poetess.

Vandana, this was so sweet,
just like you!

Dadygoose
Member

since 2010-01-01

Posts 162
A Communist country

2 posted 2010-02-21 08:00 PM

Hi Vandana. I don¡¦t know if you are male or female,
but you are a living incarnation of love.
How could this not be so,
When you write with your heart in your hands?
Know that I read your words in Braille,
And that your heart, your love
is felt as well as felt.
How direct and how explicit are your wlrds.
Thank you for letting me feel inside your soul.
BTW: this poem DESERVES more than 1 reply¡K
Come on, you people, read this poem! What¡¦s wrong with you? Reply now! Can¡¦t you even type?
I got af F in typing class.
ƒº
J

Hey, nobody's human!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2010-02-21 09:37 PM

Hey Daddygoose, you're my hero!

Vandana rocks yo!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2010-02-21 11:42 PM

vandana - only a sweetheart could write a poem such as this...

BC

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

5 posted 2010-02-22 03:20 PM

Very Special.

ooxx

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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

6 posted 2010-02-23 10:20 PM

nicely written. Enjoyed your poem.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2010-02-23 10:47 PM

This is love we feel
See through my eyes

~*~

Vandana...

Your heart's thoughts
are always beautiful.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2010-02-24 06:14 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

And my love to you right back.

I always like your poems.

Love Bobby

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