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Agentm42
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0 posted 2010-02-19 08:42 PM



The birds flying high, the bees buzzing around the sweet aroma of the summer flowers. The sun shining bright, the wind blowing a breeze, unlike i have ever felt. The feel of the healthy green untrimmed grass between my toes. The blue of the sky, the puffy white of the clouds. the sounds of the woodland creatures off in the distante woods to my left. The sound of her voice, sounding like an angle, the feel of her skin so soft it makes silk feel like sandpaper. The wind blowing her hair so gentally it looks as if she were sent from heaven on a breeze of gold. The sparkle in her eyes reminds me of a luxurious palace filled to the brim with precious metals and fine fabrics. The sweet smell if her, it kisses me like the mist of the ocean, tempting me. The moves she makes, so perfectly chriographed with the shimmer of the sun, the blow of the air and the flight of the birds. The smile she has is that of a new mother holding her child for the first time. The way it seemed so surreal, the way everything is perfectly layed out.The trees full of life, of green leaves, full of birds that call it home. The sun shines at the perfect temprature to make this the perfect day of this beautiful summer.

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GBride
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1 posted 2010-02-21 02:59 PM


Such a beautful poem!
I do believe you have captured the essence of a beautiful moment!

Agentm42
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2 posted 2010-02-21 03:05 PM


Thank you makes me happy people like my works
latearrival
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3 posted 2010-02-21 09:06 PM


Oh how I enjoyed reading this tonight. Life is indeed full of mysteries and a new born is one of the best. Thank you. latearrival
Agentm42
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4 posted 2010-02-21 10:01 PM


:] makes it all worth it when people enjoy my works. Thank you!
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