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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-02-18 09:36 PM



My eyes like the weather
Shifting and changing
Along the lengthy months
Of youthful thoughts and beautiful lulls
Of the nights dark breathe.

The shift of my breath and voice
So much like a tiger as he chases
His tail around the jungles wet path
And find his soulful seat of food and comfort.

It is my night to hold and chase,
For the hairs on my head to curl
Their way to the vines
Adjacent to my smooth path,
Smooth black slacks

It is my path for my eyes
To shift with winter
And change the summer breeze
Like the back of my spine
As it straightens to a new moon,
A new me,
A new thunder beneath every sea.

© Copyright 2010 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-02-19 06:02 PM


Very lovely poem, dear Tomer.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2010-02-20 03:08 AM


it is sensitive and beautiful, thanks for the poetic work too.

regards

yann

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