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Open Poetry #46
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2010-02-18 07:32 PM

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Despite faded blossoms—
In an old man’s bedroom
The phone rings


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-02-18 07:42 PM

... and life is good when we are not alone.

Intense message.

Love,
M
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2010-02-18 09:30 PM

I liked this one.  It has a nice flow.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos
2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2010-02-19 01:38 PM

you are overwhelming, this poem is enlightning.

yann
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