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of hesitating storms

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 02-18-2010 10:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

woman of the white hound walking
with tattoos on calves on purpose
to show the gods her standing place
not the shadows of her charms there

lest they whisper temptation voices
and she becomes the wind again
along an azure brim of smiling sea
sipping the foam of hesitating storms

she reads the poems of my gypsy pen
like the grave stones of immortals
captions that will never be love songs
or lens on the eyes of those loving blind

and a smile then is her finger tip residue


___________

daark
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Margherita
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1 posted 02-18-2010 08:00 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
lest they whisper temptation voices
and she becomes the wind again
along an azure brim of smiling sea
sipping the foam of hesitating storms



Extremely captivating and stirring.... still there is a note of non-fulfillment.

Wonderfully rendered.

Love,
Margherita
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 02-19-2010 12:39 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar...humble thanks lady friend
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 02-21-2010 08:44 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I was going to try to pick a favorite line.

*Impossible*

What a beautiful treat to find your words here Dark.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 02-23-2010 06:34 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks GS....grin
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5 posted 02-25-2010 11:28 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Daark

Where you been?  I just breathed this poem in and loved it.

Alison
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 02-26-2010 11:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms ali-san...

thank you for the eyes...am still around between storms.
Honeybee
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7 posted 04-10-2010 10:56 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

yet again this poem deserves a DAMN!   Just like all the others!

You master imagery and the message extraordinarily well. Every line is perfection and I love to read your words and through your expression I get to wear your eyes for a while
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 04-11-2010 07:09 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks ms bee...
steavenr
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9 posted 04-11-2010 11:02 PM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

"an azure brim of smiling sea

captions that will never be love songs"

I love these two lines...and your definition of a smile...nice write
faithmairee
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10 posted 01-07-2011 03:41 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

i can't pick a favorite line in your poem because they are all great...expertly penned!  You are amazingly talented.  Excellent work.

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
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stev'  thanks amigo


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ms faith..thanks ms for the eyes..I appreciate your reads
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