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Tomer
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0 posted 2010-02-15 09:47 PM



I love the small of a womanÕs back,
So soft, I could find the scarves that
Tangle between the locks of her hair
And unfold onto her back,
Brown like a fountain
Pouring the throws of her sensitive skin
Onto my arms and fingers
Through the crisp night,

Throughout the houses silent echoes
Of wind gusting from the back doors
Of the kitchen flower, decorated doors.

I could take my eyes and watch her,
Watch her for so long,
As if I was a fish between the rivers current,
gliding on the limitless path of a blue path.

I could be a shadow beneath her sheets,
Her tasteful breaths, quietly discreet,
Quietly tempting the temple of my strength, my desire
For a higher rise from the lips of her mouth
To the arc of her foot,
Watching until the bushes paved way
To the suns arc.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2010-02-17 06:45 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2010-02-18 12:38 PM


Thanks, James.  Hope all is well...

Tomer

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2010-02-18 09:34 PM


This is very good

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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