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Open Poetry #46

Light The Fires

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2010-02-15 06:33 PM

Find the light.
Kindle the once hot fires of my soul,
warm the laboring breeze of my breath.
Linger upon me as you wish ...
For I am yours.

Moments of waking pleasure
lie still upon the sands of our
ocean....haunting, spurring me
on....bringing to my lungs the
simple outcry of ecstacy as
the shiver of my soul dances
over me and the softness of
your curves entrance and
beckon me.

Years, like the skipped stone
over smooth waters, have passed
quickly by.  Still, through all
the feasts of love....I crave and
need you.

For the night binds me, arrests me,   calls
out your name...and my tears bathe me,
softly, sensually...

For I am and forever will...

Be yours....

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-02-15 06:39 PM

Yo Magnus,

This is one of the best love poems I've seen here.

Keep up the good writing.

Bobby

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2010-02-15 06:43 PM

Thanx Bobby, it is vintage Magnus from 06,
but it still tastes the same

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2010-02-15 07:41 PM

it still tastes the same and a lady can still get tipsy on it Barry.
beautiful as always...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2010-02-15 07:42 PM

Barry-so-Very...you are still so very good at writing love songs...I suspect you always will be.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2010-02-15 09:10 PM

Good vintage

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2010-02-16 01:55 PM

whew! What a fantastic Valentine's Day greeting card this could be!! Lucky lady!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2010-02-16 06:28 PM

very nice

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2010-02-16 07:07 PM

Nice...James

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