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vandana
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0 posted 2010-02-03 07:12 PM



I Will Be Home
I will be coming home
To see you soon
I will be here for you
To love you again
Watching the sunset
Hoping you will be thinking of me
When I will reach home
you should be standing for me
I will be home soon
Knock at the door
There I am
You see my smile back at ou
Smiling upon our love
Let me hear the words of love
Let me hear you whispers
Into my ears
Let me hear
your song tonight
Singing these words forever
I will be home....


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-02-03 08:52 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

this is a very well said poem.  I'm sure you will be welcomed home.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2010-02-04 10:39 AM


You express your gentle feelings of love in a captivating way, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-02-04 06:33 PM


Enjoyed...James
pensivepoet
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4 posted 2010-02-05 12:37 PM


Beautiful poem. Makes me think of all those in the military who have not seen their family for such a long time.  
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