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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 we were those handy hands on glass walls finger printing perhaps moments there like scuba divers in our wishing wells never knowing the stones with nicks where coins were seldom wished gentle but were forced through the willing as wetness was their only witness and settling to the bottom of memories was more just the action of our collecting placing pages back into books we had imagined turned back again to their perpetuation of always turning over new leaves again yes we were those glass hands on handy walls playful in our prayers to the preying gods as children of the stone mouthed widows we listened to their evening voices and we danced most graceful in their gravel ___________ daark (dichotomy of erosion)photo by DS |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Now that was awesome!Loved it all including the art. You are sure the word-master. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst...thannnnnks for the sexy thumb!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, this offering is an event of art! Incredibly mirroring picture and a poem that takes the mind into the prairies of pristine memories brilliantly rendered. So good to see you here, dear D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You need a bump on this - more people need to see this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks special lady ________ ms myst...thanks for floating me to the surface again. _________ thanks so much james... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes we were those glass hands on handy walls playful in our prayers to the preying gods ~*~ my mind changed "preying" to "prying".... and it still made me smile.  Your photos are through thoughtful eyes... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The last lines of this are worth the price of admission... even if I'd had to collect cans to earn that price. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thank you for the smile sided touch. _______________ ms suthern..you always have an open account for admission to my humble spatterings..thanks lady |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I am still not prepared for the affect your poetry has on me....still trying to shake the chills and get my hair to stand down lol I think I understand u here take care dark stranger .... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I can't believe I let this slip by the first time without comment....Loved the view from my windows, inside and out. ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king...oh let your hair just do what it wants...scooter hair usually does yes? thanks babe ________________ ms ebm, humble thanks lady friend |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
love both the poem and the photo...you have an abundance of talent...excellently written! faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms faith...thank you for your eyes and smiles |
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