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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 02-03-2010 12:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

    
we were those handy hands on glass walls
finger printing perhaps moments there
like scuba divers in our wishing wells
never knowing the stones with nicks

where coins were seldom wished gentle
but were forced through the willing
as wetness was their only witness
and settling to the bottom of memories

was more just the action of our collecting
placing pages back into books we had imagined
turned back again to their perpetuation
of always turning over new leaves again

yes we were those glass hands on handy walls
playful in our prayers to the preying gods
as children of the stone mouthed widows
we listened to their evening voices

and we danced most graceful in their gravel

___________

daark (dichotomy of erosion)photo by DS








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1 posted 02-03-2010 01:23 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

  Now that was awesome!

Loved it all including the art.  You are sure the word-master.

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ms myst...thannnnnks for the sexy thumb!!
Margherita
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3 posted 02-04-2010 07:12 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Wow, this offering is an event of art! Incredibly mirroring picture and a poem that takes the mind into the prairies of pristine memories brilliantly rendered.

So good to see you here, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita
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4 posted 02-04-2010 06:06 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

You need a bump on this - more people need to see this
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5 posted 02-04-2010 06:50 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice...James
Dark Stranger
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ms mar, thanks special lady

________

ms myst...thanks for floating me to the surface again.

_________

thanks so much james...
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7 posted 02-10-2010 01:24 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

yes we were those glass hands on handy walls
playful in our prayers to the preying gods

~*~

my mind changed "preying" to "prying"....
and it still made me smile.

Your photos are through thoughtful eyes...

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8 posted 02-14-2010 06:40 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

The last lines of this are worth the price of admission... even if I'd had to collect cans to earn that price. *S*
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9 posted 02-16-2010 11:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sun...thank you for the smile sided touch.

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ms suthern..you always have an open account for admission to my humble spatterings..thanks lady
Angel4aKing
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10 posted 09-23-2010 11:32 AM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel4aKing

I am still not prepared for the affect your poetry has on me....still trying to shake the chills and get my hair to stand down lol I think I understand u here take care dark stranger ....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Eusta B. Mae
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I can't believe I let this slip by the first time without comment....Loved the view from my windows, inside and out.  ebm
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12 posted 09-23-2010 04:43 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms king...oh let your hair just do what it wants...scooter hair usually does yes?  thanks babe

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ms ebm, humble thanks lady friend
faithmairee
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love both the poem and the photo...you have an abundance of talent...excellently written!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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14 posted 01-07-2011 04:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms faith...thank you for your eyes and smiles
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