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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 And when, the sweet oblivion Of sleep, proves to be elusive, And from the shadows, the nights Fears penetrate the irrational Mind, I let my hand glide with Sorrow, across the silent furrows Of the bed, to gently come to rest Upon your vacant pillow. A blanket of snow has fallen, Hiding the sins of the city, From the wilderness of the Tower blocks, she rises, reborn, Reaching out with fingers of sunlight, The circle turns once more, I survive the longest night.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
RH I have had some of those longest nights myself love this beauty! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A Romantic Heart - your romantic heart does show in this writing, very nice... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
One of your best, my friend. j. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Fears penetrate the irrational Mind, I let my hand glide with Sorrow, across the silent furrows Of the bed, to gently come to rest Upon your vacant pillow. I loved this part, its very visual. And poetic. Great poem ARH. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a rather timely poem for this particular day!: "A blanket of snow has fallen, Hiding the sins of the city..." yes ... INDEED it has!! |
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dazzlingprecious New Member
since 2010-02-10
Posts 9 |
I really enjoy it. !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is one of your best, ARH. Your poetry is growing deeper and more profound. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is one of your best, ARH. Your poetry is growing deeper and more profound. Ida |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Yes, that sweet oblivion can sometimes be elusive, ARH. I do like the direction and depth of your more recent work. Nicely done. I like the old, too. CG |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful, dear ARH! And the pictures are spectacular! Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Beautiful as ever Romantic. Thats one thing I can be assure of that will never change, no matter how long I'm away. Happy Valentines |
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