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Lady of the Lake
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Lady of the Lake |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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She looks out upon the water Wondering what ever happened to her The smell so fresh and wind so cool Makes her sight so much farther Little does she know, one exists too, Her equal, just across the water Sometimes he thinks of her, Sometimes she thinks of him He looks out upon the same blue lake Wondering what it will take To be immortal together A picture they would make As waves getting wetter Getting lost for drowning’s sake Sometimes he thinks of her, Sometimes she thinks of him If only their eyes, lids open could see Each other waiting distantly A perfect mirror of one another Each, a lifetime waiting patiently Will that time come? they wonder Would that it could, one day be Sometimes he thinks of her, Sometimes she thinks of him, Sometimes it’s all she can take When she becomes, The lady of the lake |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one. -Juju -Juju |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you, Juju. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 This lady, enjoyed your poem. ~ARH |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
lovely.. thank u for this write kerri |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chalmette Guy - one of your best, I can feel the longing in these words... BC |
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