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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2010-02-02 01:57 AM


Your eyes are beautiful and pure
But I can feel it in the air
White puffs and shivers
And my jacket is the cure

Night air
Much too satisfying
Must stare
Moon light reflecting off her black hair

With each heartbeat
My heart leaps
Walking on clouds
What beautiful bliss

The unwavering fear
Comes too quick to clench
Too scared to fall
Fall from these clouds

How the ground takes it all
No mercy in its blueprint
Leave my heart a crater
Nothing but a footprint

Listening to long songs
Of how love could be
Would be
Should be
Won't see
That the spark between two lovers
Is more then magic could ever be

"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2010-02-02 05:13 PM


one of my favorites of yours,
has alot of love in it!

~ARH

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2010-02-02 05:53 PM


Very lovely.
\\Juju

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