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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2010-02-01 11:44 PM


A Lady Dreams in August


Though it wasn't yet Autumn,
the leaves began to change
while the earth became parched

Drawn by fairies song and dance
She fell into a deep trance.

The wild oak leaves fell down
Like shimmering rose pedals
Over where she lay asleep.


Juju

I hope this turned out well.




-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (02-02-2010 05:32 PM).]

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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2010-02-02 12:54 PM


Lovely Juju~ A grand poem for Kacy!

yes it did turn out well.

~ARH

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2 posted 2010-02-02 01:06 AM


She would have loved this.
Margherita
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3 posted 2010-02-02 05:27 PM


A tender heartfelt write dedicated to Midnitesun. Yes I agree she would have ... or dare I say she will love this very much.

Love,
Margherita


passing shadows
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4 posted 2010-02-02 10:57 PM


wow!

very tender and touching

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2010-02-02 11:35 PM


Juju - turned out well indeed...

BC

OwlSA
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6 posted 2010-02-03 12:54 PM


Thank you, Juju.

Margherita, yes, Kacy would, will and does love this.

I am grateful that Kacy is at peace, but so many, many hearts have been ripped to pieces . . . I just can't believe that she isn't here any more.  

Owl

jwesley
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7 posted 2010-02-03 06:02 AM


The only regret she may have reading this, is that she didn't write it herself, but then, she would love it all the more because it was written by you....


j.

Juju
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In your dreams
8 posted 2010-02-03 05:06 PM


I am glad.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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