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Eirian
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since 2009-04-13
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0 posted 2010-01-30 09:59 AM



A pale moon glows
The stars twinkle bright
The faeries are dancing
It’s a magical night

Soft flowers are tucked
Into dark flowing tresses
And glittering on such
Ethereal dresses

The water is shimmering
With the silver moonlight
Oh what a beautiful
Glorious sight!

The scent of jasmine
Permeates the air
As the garden is filled
With ones so Fair

Their twinkling laughter
Is like an instrument all its own
The music so delightful
The night starts to moan

And there on the shores
Of a mysterious sea
Such pretty faeries
They call to me

© Copyright 2010 Sharree Vitnell - All Rights Reserved
wicked
Junior Member
since 2010-01-29
Posts 22
Florida, USA
1 posted 2010-01-30 02:26 PM


beautiful imagery.

I am that I am,
And that makes it me.
I float like a rock
But I sting like a bee.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2010-02-04 06:31 PM


enjoyed...James
CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
3 posted 2010-02-06 01:43 AM


Very pretty... I usually don't like rhyming poetry.. but I did like this one...

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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