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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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0 posted 2010-01-30 08:49 AM


I'll take a breath and let you plead your case
Just remember much like a shoe
The strings of our lives interlace
Go on now and argue your side
How you are as beautiful and pure
We must coward and hide
As I breath
Please,
I beg you to speak
Tell me why you believe
Your race on the human pyramid
Is at the peak
And if it is so, and we are at the bottom
Can it not be because we are strong to hold the burden?


"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

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viking_metal
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1 posted 2010-01-30 09:04 AM


That is, lost-poet, an incredible thought indeed.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2010-02-15 03:21 AM


Very good - and hah! backatcha.  

A

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