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Hitman612s
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since 2010-01-27
Posts 11
Illinois,

0 posted 2010-01-27 11:43 AM



Love
Love is like a fire
The more you put into it
The longer it lasts
If it is ignored
That brightness will pass
Pass
Oh yes it will pass
It needs to be recognized
In all of its forms
Lack of love is the cause of all these social storms

This needs to be known

Love is not just a word
It is many other things
Allow love into your life
And changes it will bring
Changes like
A picture with a smile
Not a picture with a frown
Allow love into your life and it will turn your world around

This needs to be known

Love is a result
And love is a reason
Love is the reason you can’t sleep
The result of that girl is love
Hold up, that don’t rhyme
But that’s the thing with love
It twists your mind
You backwards say stuff
… Say stuff backwards, my bad….
If you don’t have love
Love is something you should have

This needs to be known

Love may make you soundlike a fool
But love makes you feel great
If you don’t have love
You have too much hate
So push out the hate
And pull in the love
And the heavens will shine from way up above
But don’t just listen to me
Find it out on your own
And then you’ll know how much you’ve grown
But don’t go chasing love
Let love find you
Because if you force love
That love is not true

This needs to be known

Love is a key
And it can open your heart
Even when you think you’re at the end
It can give you a new start
Love can come to you no matter what you’ve done
And love can come at any age
Even now when we’re so young

THIS NEEDS TO BE KNOWN



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1 posted 2010-01-27 11:32 PM


Love changes form so many times in a lifetime, and each time it is wonderfully new.  Without love in your life you have nothing.  Nice message.
Emi<3Naruto =]
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since 2009-09-05
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2 posted 2010-01-28 01:15 AM


i love this poem its really great. love can be so many things, i agree
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