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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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  Where Have you been? My frantic heart beating, I exploded in silence, Why must it chain me?, Is not a broken heart punishment enough?, pain sleeps with me, eats with me, ache, ache, ache, Pains' grip will not loosen its clasp, My dieing heart, chokes on your fragments, will it be enough to extingish the flame?, suffocating the last small flicker, salty tears flow, slowly dampening it out, Rest in peace love, once you were bright red, beautiful, all is fair in love and war? death has come to you, color fades to black.  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-27-2010 02:05 AM).] |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow, I love this one. The ache and the stark bleakness. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting walk on the 'dark side'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A Romantic Heart - nice write, like the presentation and also the words... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for your sweet replies! warms my heart! ~ARH |
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