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viking_metal
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0 posted 2010-01-27 01:00 AM


Love will find you
but only on it's own
only on it's own terms

I'm sick
sick and tired
of striving for you
whoever you are.

I'd bet my life
you have pretty hair
and bright eyes.

Love will find you
but only on it's own
only on it's own terms

I bet you laugh
nearly as much as I do
and your breath
has a feminine sound.

I bet your tongue
tastes like clear night's sky
and your skin
smells like wind on a lake.

Love will find you
but only on it's own
only on it's own terms.

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1 posted 2010-01-27 01:46 AM


This is beautiful - and you will find that woman to spend your time with.  How can you help but when you write like this?  Like you said, love will find you on its own terms.

Alison

viking_metal
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2 posted 2010-01-27 02:26 AM


Love finds you when you're not looking,


problem is, I can't stop looking.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison
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3 posted 2010-01-27 09:39 AM


Well, then you just gotta enjoy the view!
viking_metal
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4 posted 2010-01-27 11:10 AM


Ha.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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