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viking_metal
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0 posted 2010-01-25 04:26 AM



Another year
I'm still tall to some folks
still strong, inside and out
still bullheaded, to a reasonable degree
still dip from time to time
still like beer from the bottle,
though I drink it from a can.

Another year
and I'm still standing
know exactly where I am,
though I've not the slightest
as to where I'm going.
still dancing on the inside
every time a pretty woman touches my arm

Another year
still love my dog
still training and competing
still love the taste of a cigar
still love flirting with old ladies
just to make them feel young

Another year
I'm another year older
still forging ahead
however slowly
I'm still here
getting older, getting wiser
still falling in love
still falling in love with the world.

Happy birthday to me.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

© Copyright 2010 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2010-01-25 04:43 AM


Well, got to love this Birthday child who ponders so graciously!

Happy Birthday, dear Paul.

That's the attitude dear Poet, YOU GOT THAT RIGHT. LOVE IS THE SECRET TO STAY YOUNG.

You made me smile with the affirmation that you love flirting with old ladies to make them feel good. That's great. Usually at a certain age we become transparent. To have the sensitivity to gift them with a smile is a wonderful trait.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
It's my daughter's birthday too today.

Love and a hug for the occasion.
Margherita margopargo


viking_metal
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2 posted 2010-01-25 04:52 AM


Thanks very much, mademoiselle margopargo. I appreciate it.  

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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3 posted 2010-01-25 05:00 AM


Paul,

This is wonderful and I am glad that you are still all those things.  These are the things that make you so special.

Please look over here
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Your friend,
Alison

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4 posted 2010-01-25 07:38 AM


Keep dancing on the inside, Paul, and ALWAYS keep loving your dog!

I wish you a terrific birthday, sir.

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5 posted 2010-01-25 08:58 AM


still love flirting with old ladies
just to make them feel young

LOL... And we sure appreciate it! *S*

Birthdays are a great time for reflections, ponderings and taking stock... I love this look at you! *S*

viking_metal
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6 posted 2010-01-25 01:06 PM


Aliboo... Thank you so much. I sent you an email, thank you. Thank you.

Balladeeeeeeeeerintheheadlights... Thank you sir, it was a pretty good birthday. My dog is a young hooligan, not unlike myself. How can a few rapscallions with nothing to lose not get along?

ScartissuethatIwishyousaw... Thank you so very much!


Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Zeigeist
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7 posted 2010-01-25 04:29 PM


Bottle, can, ah...long as its cold....Happy Birthday dude.

Zeitgeist.

viking_metal
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8 posted 2010-01-25 07:50 PM


Agreed! Folks are so picky, not us, z-dawg, no sir.


Thanks

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Earl Brinkman
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9 posted 2010-09-21 10:21 AM


i found this so orginal that I declare that every day shall be your birthday from now on.
ken206573
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10 posted 2010-09-21 11:32 AM


Another year older, another year wiser and your poem shows it well. I hope you have one heck of a birthday, drink, smile, love and laugh for the next wonderful day.


Eusta B. Mae
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11 posted 2010-09-21 01:49 PM


Happy Birthday! May you flirt forever and a day!  Here's to a year older in the days and ways of being young! ebm
naturegirl
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12 posted 2010-09-21 05:48 PM


"still dancing on the inside" I love that & that you give older ladies smiles!

Happy Birthday!

viking_metal
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13 posted 2010-09-23 11:02 AM


Thanks Earl, for the compliment and the resurrection of this old-ash poem!

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

viking_metal
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14 posted 2010-09-23 11:03 AM


Ken... Come january, I will!

Eusta... Thankee very mucho.

Naturesquirrel... Thanks!

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2010-09-26 08:38 AM


Happy belated...and so glad this came back up at such an opportune time.  You don't realize the wisdom of your words...oh, but these will echo into many a future with a lasting zeal and pleasant enthusiasm.
Really great work.

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