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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-01-24 02:33 PM


        stasis

deep-Winter wind;
love forever lost

memories, hopes,
   and dreams

all frozen
      
       --- b. e. adams (1/24/2010)

© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-01-25 03:22 AM


Spring will come ...

I felt like holding my breath while reading your poem. It's powerful in its sadness, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2010-01-25 02:28 PM


not likely in my case at least ...
this is a 'winter of discontent'
most permanent, methinks! ...

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-01-26 07:52 AM


You write sadness so beautifully, Bruce.
                                   Ida

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2010-01-26 11:08 AM


Sending a hug and some cheer your way,
the sunshine will be back again,
just around the corner!

ARH~

2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2010-01-26 04:20 PM


Hello Bruce, your poem summerize the essential, the quest for love and the share with nature and others.  it sounds like a serene poem.

regards

yann

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