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DarkProphet
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since 2010-01-13
Posts 6


0 posted 2010-01-24 01:53 PM


Heres something from my free time


The Truth

There's this thing
Something always there
Hindering you like a broken wing
Making life hard to bare

Its always present
No matter how hard we try
Always leaving an indent
On those that lie

No way around this
Eventually it comes out
Proving wrong our bliss
Showing what your really about

Bound by its constantness
We bow to its power
Joyed by its ability to impress
Shining tall like a tower

This mystical object
That we all come to see
Sooner or latter
Is what is to be

The Truth...


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Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
1 posted 2010-01-25 04:38 PM


I like the simple "Truth" in this poem DP.
  And when that truth is so disturbing..people choose to believe lies.

Zeitgeist.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2010-01-25 09:35 PM


Yo DarkProphet,

"..and the Truth will make you whole.."

Bobby

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2010-01-29 12:06 PM




nicely done DarkProphet


Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
4 posted 2010-02-01 10:58 PM


this is great. really enjoyed.

Joe

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2010-02-01 11:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
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