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Open Poetry #46
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vandana
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0 posted 2010-01-24 12:23 PM



Only Path
This is only path
I have chosen
In life
Where ever my life takes
Where my heart makes
Me to think over my life
This only path
That follows my heart
That follows this only road
To home
I can find a peace of my mind
Where I see a wind
coming through this path
I find a heart
That keeps me going through
My heart
Now I have found only path
To my heart
And to my home







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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-01-24 12:39 PM

I enjoyed this much, dear Vandana, your path is the path of love and your heart will indeed guide you beautifully.

Love,
Margherita
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2010-01-24 11:51 PM

vandana - home is where the heart desires, nice write...

BC
2islander2
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3 posted 2010-01-26 04:28 PM

I think like Marguerita, that the only path is the path of love, your poem is quiet and serene and develops its message with beauty.

regards

yann
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