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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2010-01-23 12:05 PM



I broke my guitar,
I broke my right leg,
I broke my new car,
I broke a bottle of beer,
but I don’t care,
I can’t play music now,
I can’t walk in streets,
but I don’t care cause
Babe, you broke my heart.

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-01-23 02:21 PM


Yo Yann,

Try to get over it and smile.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2010-01-23 03:38 PM


yann - believe I'd rather have a broken leg, but you said it as it is...

BC

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2010-01-24 06:44 AM


The world falls to pieces when our heart is broken, you are so right, dear Yann. This is bare truth very effectfully expressed.

But hearts have a wonderful quality of mending if we allow them!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

2islander2
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4 posted 2010-01-26 04:31 PM


Thanks Bobby for the supporttive and kind message, this is helpful even if it is an old story.

regards

yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2010-01-26 04:31 PM


Yes Bill, better a broken leg, enjoyed your comment.

regatrds

yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2010-01-26 04:32 PM


Thanks dear Margherita for the mending words, you have such a talent of commenting with nice words.

hugs

yann

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