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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 There you lay, engraved in blue, poetry's children birthed, from love-soaked hearts, History's pages preserved time, our words were worn like clothes, soft, comforting, warm, wrapped, with stitches of intimate conversations. Rembrandts we became, words brush-stroked on hearts canvas, painted with deepest reds, passionate hues, layered on this blue canvas, Romantic scenes, simple dreams, tucked away with loving care, its all there, hidden in pages after pages, they whisper, a testimony to our love. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
...pages preserving time, our words ... worn like clothes, soft, comforting, warm, wrapped, ... stitches by intimate conversations... words brush-stroked on hearts canvas... fine imagery of Romanticism applause for this 'penning'! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
our words were worn like clothes, soft, comforting, warm, wrapped, with stitches of intimate conversations. beautifully expressed... my favorite lines M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your sensitive, romantic heart speaks beautifully here, dear ARH. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A Romantic Heart - lovely romantic write... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think your poetry is getting deeper and more beautiful, ARH. Ida |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for your replies and compliments... yes, Ida I am trying to reach deeper, its like you know and feel how you wish to say it, but putting all that emotion and passion into words, allowing the reader to feel and know what you mean is sometimes a daunting task. But a task I love to take on! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are sure succeeding in getting that depth into your poems, and these like a few others, were absolutely my favorite lines in this wonderful poem. our words were worn like clothes, soft, comforting, warm, wrapped, with stitches of intimate conversations. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Poems like these always make you shine, ARH! I missed you're writing very much so. I do hope you continue to post frequently. Lovely,  ARCTIC WIND |
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