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WindWalker12
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since 2009-10-17
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0 posted 2010-01-20 08:54 PM


Change Your Mind

I was out walking today,
wondering why I keep falling
into the same potholes?
Even when I go on a new road
there they are again: same potholes
as on my previous road.

Then I passed an old man;
I distinctly heard him mutter,
“Walking a different road
will not change your life:
the potholes you fall into,
you carry in your mind
and sow wherever you go.

If you want real change,
change your mind;
change the inner, not the outer.
Abandon old energy patterns
so new ones can form;
do this: you will see a new life
from new experiences.”

I made a vow to accept
what I heard that old man say
to put it in practice today.
But silly me!  
Making vows is old energy!
Another pothole on the track!

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-01-20 09:24 PM


Yo WindWalker12,

I suppose we can learn something from potholes, but you have to be careful.

NAH--don't listen to that old guy.  Some things arn't worth knowing about.

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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2 posted 2010-02-15 12:40 PM


“Walking a different road
will not change your life:
the potholes you fall into,
you carry in your mind
and sow wherever you go.

If you want real change,
change your mind;
change the inner, not the outer.
Abandon old energy patterns
so new ones can form;
do this: you will see a new life
from new experiences.”

fair 'advice' !

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2010-02-16 01:58 PM


a change of mind is good sometimes


Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2010-02-16 02:07 PM


Sometimes you need to change the road you walk to change your mind about life and what is important.  

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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5 posted 2010-02-17 11:45 PM




"But silly me!  
Making vows is old energy!
Another pothole on the track!"

great poem
perfect ending WindWalker

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